Dark's Angel

My heart aches
The bloody rain pours down
It reflects what I’m feeling
Tears of blood roll down
my face and hit the ground.
Clenching my eyes shut tight
I try to shut out everything
That wants to hurt me
I feel empty
I feel that something is missing
There’s an emptiness deep
within my soul
My heart is crying
My mind wishes it to stop
The emptiness I feel consumes me
It makes me want to lash out
The tears of blood flow more freely
I cry out in frustration as I
Feel my heart clench in loneliness.
And the tears flow faster
Opening my eyes
As the bloody rain stopped
I looked around and I
Saw that everything was covered in blood.
The emptiness I felt grew
And I knew something
I was alone.

I like it. It has a sad and angsty feel to it and I can relate to it in some ways. I can feel the emotion flowing off of every line. This person left you behind...now you're going to leave him behind.
I like this part of it alot.
"I'll hide away
In the back I promise to stay
Silent and smiling
But deep inside I'm crying
Once again you've left me behind
Maybe someone should to to you in kind
Forgoten again"
You most likely don't want to show that you're crying. You have to be strong for you're own sake...