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Dark Reminder of You

The dark sky and stars

Remind me of what we used to do

We always had fun but

That suddenly changed

Why did you betray me?

Why did you go to her?

We were always happy

Why did you leave me?

The ocean splashes around my ankles

and I look out and see a sea of endless black

All I can be reminded of is you

Why did you have to go?

I loved you and you left me

I'll be better of without you now

You changed a lot when you went to her

Everything is a dark reminder of you

Everything.

Remember

Do I know you?

I don't know who you are

I don't remember you

Quit calling my name

I won't answer

I see you staring at me

Quit following me

I don't remember you

Lost in the fog

Of my forgotten memories

I don't remember you

Have you forgottten me?

Do you still love me?

I finally femember you.


Angel_Hiei.jpg

I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it.

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I got bored again...I seem to either write or draw...here's another. When I get another scanner I share some of my fan art and my original art with you guys...

Goodbye

The sky darkens.

Your presence fades.

I always end up alone.

Can't some one like me for me?

Cant some one stay with me?

Am I repulsive?

Am I unworthy of frienship?

Everyone that tries to get close to me,

usually has an alterior motive.

Why can't someone be my friend?

Why can't someone not use me for their own gain?

I'm through with being someone else's toy.

You're never gonna see me again.

You're never going to get the chance,

to use me for you own personal gain.

This is goodbye to all the pain and sadness.

This is goodbye to you.

Sayonara.


Angel_Hiei.jpg

I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it.

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I wrote this one tuesday.

A Broken Heart

The tears stream down my face

As I look at your retreating form

You say It can never work out

That we can never be together

Why did you lead me on?

Why did you make me think you

had feelings for me?

I've come to accept your love of my twin and my one true best friend

But your betrayal is something

I cannot forgive.

My feelings for you are slowly turning to

Hatred.


Angel_Hiei.jpg

I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it.

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Dark Reminder of You

I'll be better of without you now

You changed a lot when you went to her

Everything is a dark reminder of you

Everything.

^ it seemed like your poem started like the first line and clearly representing that then suddenly changed at the last moment to a different view. I would like to hear more on that view

Remember

i like this one it seems simple but i cant shake of the feeling that theres more...

Goodbye

i think you should spice this one up a bit more

A Broken Heart

ditto

i like how you ask youself questions in your writting its kind of becoming your signature but i would like to see you branch out from that work as well

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