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Press Play:

It's raining again

Do you hear it, can you see

Or, are you blind and def as you are to me

Days fly by, speeding past in their pause

Following Murphy's Law and every clause

Press play and hit the stop

Hurry, while we're still on top

Rent me a room on floor thirteen

Fastforward to our senseless routine

Drive by's and bullets to souls

Shot from the barrel of an assasin's role

Rewind in a fool's desperate hope

To escape the nuse made of memories rope

Music consoles and rips wounds anew

Notes falling like blood from a sky so blue

Press play and watch the story be told

Of a love like fire that froze in the cold

Rented rooms and lies filled with rues

Senseless routines as an empty muse

Thirteen floors and hit the stop

Freeze in time the image of love on top

Fastforward and skip the tragic end

Of hearts to broken to ever mend

A single tear to hit rewind

Back to the begining, to that beautiful broken mind

Press play...and watch as the days fly by...


[sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC]

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:clap: very well done, i can see it, as one of those poems, read with every word said aloud, said froceful, and with meaning, fiting perfectly in to each verse.

your poem got across it's message very well, and nothing of the poem seemed cliche, in term's of "rhyme's" which can be really difficult to use something else, then the normal, so other's can understand, rather then painting an image with words.

like you did.

very good!


Dubirds on a Plane!

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"Don't Mess With The Nation, That Needs Medication!" - Christopher Titus - end of the world comedy tour

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I wish I could rewind and watch my kids growing up again. Their 3 and 1.5, and the remote seems like it's stuck on the fast forward button. I hope I can find the play button before I find myself crying on the rewind button too.


Understand this lad, fate is a fickle lady. Work with the hand you're dealt and you may just be able to run your flag up the pole. Don't, and well, you may just find your mast cut down.

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Thanx guys, and I don't have children yet Mathias, but I know that my rents were saying the other day that they couldn't believe how fast I had grown up. While they were sad that I was no longer a child, they said they were so proud of the woman I had become.


[sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC]

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