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Calming Hearts and Spirits

The blue-green waves splash around my ankles

As I walk down the beach

The roar of the ocean waves calms me

but my mind still is a turbulent mess.

I go for a swim among the fish to calm my spirit

But that doesn't work either.

I try sunbathing with my friends

To calm my crying heart

But that fails too.

Is there anything that will help me?

My heart is crying but I really don't know why.

Is it because you left me?

I keep telling myself it was for the best.

My spirit is restless

And my mind is a mess right now.

My mind is urging me to go somewhere

I'm not sure where to go.

I'll be on the road until

My heart stops crying

And my spirit settles.

Alone

The darkness of the shadows

The eerie mist that clings in the darkness

What is going to happen?

The full moon is hanging overhead

And I'm all alone

The hooting of the owls

And the rustling of the leaves

Makes it even more evident

That you left and that no one's here for me.

I wonder if there's anyone else like me

Alone wandering, staring at the moon

Wondering why they were left

Wondering why they were now alone too.


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I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it.

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My mind is urging me to go somewhere

^ that was the strongest line in your first poem

it drives completly mad, because its such a burning notion that you cant regect that can run you up the wall. because while you wish for it to leave it will stay binding you almost crushing you driving you into a panic because you can not answer it it has to die away and it devors you slowly

do you really live near a forest of some sort that you wander in?

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Something like that but not quite. There's a big wooded area by my house that I wander around in sometimes. It's just woods that I live by but I'd love to live near the real forest...


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I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it.

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I see a mix of things when I hear the word alone. I see a lonely person, the moon, darkness, sometimes the stars, and mist. My imagination gets warped sometimes with some words...


Angel_Hiei.jpg

I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it.

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