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~*Bloody Rain*~

A bloody rain

Falls on the fight to stay sane

Never to rest or see the light

My worst nightmares haunt the night

Every moment is cold and dark

My song as silent as the dead lark

Here and now waiting to die

This is where I will forever lie

In the end it seems so wrong

That I've had to endure this so long

Left inside my dying shell

Only the shadows my story will tell

The light has gone and so must I

A haunted sob escapes as I begin to cry

They come at last silent and cold

The chains to my life their clawed hands hold

Standing before the demon ties

One by one they shout my lies

Pushed to the ground down on my knees

They only laugh at my sob ridden plees

The blade raised high and ready stands

Falling down with a death dealing sigh

A silent scream my final word

As I fall into the fires of my own created world...


[sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC]

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Damn...that is...wow. It reminds me of "Faust" for some reason. Nice...


"There's no such thing as can't. You always have a choice."--Ken Gor, Ying hung boon sik II

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*huggles and licks* :happy:

*is licked by accident* Hehe, cool poem HC.

Sabe, you're talking if that German alchemist guy ne ?


I am putting myself to the fullest possible use, which is all I think that any conscious entity can ever hope to do.

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Sabe, you're talking if that German alchemist guy ne ?

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Alchemist, Necromancer, Doctor...fool. Yeah, that'd be him. Doctor Faustus, from Goeth's play.


"There's no such thing as can't. You always have a choice."--Ken Gor, Ying hung boon sik II

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this one is similar to you other one but carries in a different direction

i think you used die to much in the begining and i was kind of seeing a different ending

My song as silent as the dead lark

you shouldn't use that many as' it takes away from the effect

Left inside my dying shell

this is my favorite line i can see it, and i think i represents your poem well

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Thanx Honeybee, and yeah I'm trying to work on using the same word twice in the same line. I'm actually trying to get my writting back, I actually kinda lost it there for awhile, but I thank you for your comments.


[sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC]

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